Review of: "Maternal Misconceptions Against Infant Sunlight Exposure Are Still Bottlenecks in Northwest Ethiopia, by 2022"
Year: 2023
Type: peer-review
Abstract: The method section should express some information about the sample size… 2. Please replace "Bivariate and multivariate logistic regression analyses" with the bivariable and multi-variable logistic regression analyses.3. In the results section of your abstract, please consider including the AOR of each associated factor with its 95%CI.4. Did you do multinomial regression???I don't think so.Look at the last line of your results section in the abstract. Consider language revision throughout your abstract.Introduction/Background 1. SNNPR: Please don't abbreviate when things appear for the first time in your text, and as per my knowledge, Aleta Wondo is not part of SNNPR recently.Please edit it.2. I saw some mix-up in your background section.Please merge the information (previous research works) that reveals the level of knowledge and practice among participants, which reflects the direct image of your study population.So, merge literature on the level of knowledge into one paragraph and the literature that revealed the practice status of mothers into another single paragraph.3. Throughout your background section, please consider language issues.4.Where is the problem statement??And the significance of your study???For me, any study that doesn't explain the necessity of the study never sounds scientifically sound.Please include text that describes the statement of the problem and the significance of the study at the end of your background information.
Source: Qeios
DOI: 10.32388/5oeiuv
Author: Merkineh Markos Lorato
Language: English
Subfield: Epidemiology
Field: Medicine
Domain: Health Sciences
Open Access status: diamond
OpenAlex ID: W4390340468